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Humraaz hai ek raaz

●Humraaz hai ek raaz

~Story by:- preet~


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Kahani yahan se padhe
Arre aaj toh bhut late ho gaya bhaiya thoda jaldi chalayie please...
Raunak ne auto wale se apni ghadi ko dekhte huye kaha raat ke 11 bajj rahe the aaj office me kaam jayda hone ki wajah se raunak late ho gaya tha
Bhaiya aage se left le lena
Tabhi auto wala ek dum auto rokk deta hai
Kya huya bhaiya....
Sir me isse aage nahi jaa sakta
Lekin kyu raunak ne hairani se pucha
Bus itni raat ko iss raste se jana khatre se khalli  nahi hai
Lekin bhaiya me itni raat ko akela kahan jaunga....
Woh sab me nahi janta
Auto wale ki jidd ke karan raunak ko utarna padta hai
Woh chalne lagta hai
Hye maha dev ek toh mujhe andhere se itna darr lagta hai uper se yeh auto wala yahan utaar gaya
Tabhi usse kisi ke chalne ki aawaaz aati hai jaise usske piche koi aa raha ho takk takk takk..kadmo ki aahat tez ho rahi thi badhi he ajeeb aawaaz thi
Woh darr jata hai aur apna phone nikalta hai aur apni maa ko phone karta hai
Raunak:-hello mummy
Samne se saveta ji bolti hai
Saveta:-beta kahan reh gya itna andhera ho gaya
Raunak:-mummy auto wale ne yahin utaar diya aur mujhe apne piche kisi ka ehsaas ho raha hai
Saveta:-hyye bhagwan kahin isse phir se wahin durra toh nhi pad gya
....beta tu wahin rukk kahin matt dekhna me.abhi tere papa ko bhejti hoon
Saveta apne pati ramesh ji ko bulati hai saveta ko chinta me dekh woh jaldi se niche aate hai
Ramesh:-kya huya
Saveta:-jii raunak woh highway se aage wali sadhak pe hai mujhe lagta hai usse phir wahin daurra padh gya hai apni dawai bhi nhi leke gaya
Ramesh uski aawaz sunke wahan se nikal padte hai
Udhar kadmo ki aahat tez ho rahi thi
Achanak ek ladka godhe pe savaar uske samne aa jaata hai
Ap itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahe hain
Raunak uski aawaz sunke darr se band ki huyi aankhe kholta hai
Raunak woh me
Kya huya ap itne ghabraye huye kyu hain
Kuch nahi bus office se ghar jaa raha tha auto wale ne yahin utaar diya aur app yahan kya kar rahe hain
Hum aksar yahan gudh sawari ke liye aate hai aaj mann kiya toh jayda aage nikal aaye ...
Ap itne darre huye kyu hain
Woh mujhe andhere de darr lagta hai
Haahahah...itni raat ko yahan akele ghumna khatre se khalli nahi aur khaas kar itni khoobsurat cheezo ko toh bilkul nhi
Hmmm..battien kafhi achi banna lete hain ap
Raj gharane se hain
Sach me...
Humare pitta suraj ghar ke maharaj the
Oh really ...
Waise apka naam kya hai
Raunak aur apka...
Tamas...
Chaliye hum apko chor dete hain
Raunak aur tamas chalne lagte hai tabhi samne se ek gadhi atti hai aur aake unke samne rukk jatti hai raunak dekhta hai usme se uske papa bahar aate hai
Raunak bhaag ke apne papa ke paas jata hai
Raunak:-thank god papa ap aa gaye
Ramesh:-tum thik toh ho na beta
Raunak:-ji papa inhone humari madad ki
Ramesh:-kisne
Raunak piche mud kar dekhta hai toh naa he tamas wahan tha aur naa he uska godha
Raunak;-abhi toh yahin tha
Ramesh ko lagta hai ki raunak ko bachpan ki tarah phir veham huya hai
Woh usse gadhi me bitha ke le jata hain
Ghar jaa ke raunak uske baare me he sochne lagta hai aur usse kab neend aa jatti hai usse pta he nahi chalta
Kareeb aadhi raat ko achanak uske kamre ka darwaza khulta hai koi raunak ke kamre me dastak deta hai aur wahin se wapis chala jata hai aur darwaza apne ap band ho jata hai
Next day
Raunak apne friend Ricky ko kal raat ke baare me sab batata hai
Vicky:-woow yaar tumhare liye toh aadhi raat ko super hero aaya phir
Raunak:-haan yaar warna me toh darr ke maree behosh he hoone wala tha
Tabhi koi Vicky ko bulata hai
Me abhi aata hoon itna keh ke Vicky wahan se chala jata hai
Kuch he der me andhera ho jata hai aur aaj phir tamas raunak ko milta hai
Aap roj yahan aate ho
Nahi kabhi kabhi
Lekin apke liye roj aa sakta hoon
Acha sach
Koi shakk hai
Koi shakk nahi
Aishe he kuch dinno ki mulaqaaten kab pyaar me badal gyi pta he nahi chala aur ek shaam
Tamas aur raunak saath chal rahe the aur tamas raunak ka haath pakad leta hai
Raunak ek dum thanda pad jata hai
Usse wakhat tamas uska haath chor deta hai
Kya huya ...
Kuch nahi Zara haath toh dikhana
Raunak apna haath aage karta hai aur tamas uska haath choom leta hai
Raunak ;-yeh yeh kab kiya kaise kiya
Uske haath me ek anguthi hoti hai
Bus kar liya kuch raaz raaz he ache hai...
Waah humara humraaz hai ek raaz
Humme apka tarika pasand aaya
Hum pasand nhi hai
Tamas ne bechaini se pucha
Yeh sawal par raunak sharma jata hai
Aur tamas usse uthha leta hai i love you raunak...
I love you too tamas
Shaadi kroge humse
Ghar walon se baat karni hogi milna hoga apko
Thik hai hum tayar hai
Next day
Raunak bhut khush tha akhir pehla pyaar hota he itna khaas hai tabhi uska phone bajta hai
Phone Vicky ka tha woh usse aaj office naa aane ka karan puchta hai
Aaj woh ghar walon se baat karne aane wala hai
Tera woh super hero...
Haan...
Waah baat yahan tak pahunch gyi aur humme pta bhi nahi
Yaar btane ka mauka he nhi mila
Acha naam toh bta uska
Tamas...
Kya ....kya kaha tune
Tamas...
Hanhaa tujhe iska mtlb pta hai
Haan
Iska matlab hota hai andhera jiss andhera se tujhe itna darr lagta tha aj tujhe usse pyaar ho gaya
Haan yaar ab toh andhere se dar bhi nhi lagta hai uske saath itna safe feel hota hai
Chal acha hai waise bhi mujhe darpoke raunak pasand nhi tha
Acha kuch jayda nhi bol raha tu tujhe toh me kal btunga
Acha humare guru ji aane wale hai toh kuch dinn ke liye me busy rahunga
Tumhare woh guru ji unse toh meri mummy bhi milna chahti hai kya tum unhe humare ghar bhi laa skty ho
Thik hai ....
Acha chal woh aane he wala hai
Kuch he der me tamas raunak ke ghar pahunch jata hai
Raunk ke mummy papa ke pair chutte huye woh baith jata hai
Ramesh;-beta humne apne bete ko baree najjo se paala hai aur uske samlingik hona ka pta humme bhut pehle se he hai aur humne isse humesha savikaar kiya hai
Saveta:-haan beta aur aj jab isne apke baare me baat ki toh humne ek baar tumse milna sahi smjha
Ramesh:-waise tum karte kya ho beta
Tamas:-jii humare pita ji suraj pur ke maharaj the wahan ki saari zameen humari he hai
Ramesh:-iska matlab tum raj Kumar ho
Tamas:-jii humme apni tarif khud karna pasand nahi
Ramesh:-waah itni sab hone ke baad bhi koi ghamand nahi
Ramesh aur saveta ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur muskurate hai aur ek saath bolte hai humme yej rishta manjoor hai
Tamas aur raunak dono he bhut khush hote hai
Ab raunak aur tamas jayda se jayda samhe saath me guzarne lagge the
Ek dinn raunak ke gharwalon ki manjuri leke tamas usse bahar khaane ke liye le jata hai khaana khaake aate wakhat dono ek dusre ka haath pakde huye the chaand ki chaandni unke pyaar ko aur roshna rahi thi
Iss khoobsurat pal me dono ek dusre me kho jatte hain aur tamas ke hoonth raunak ke hoothoon ke kareeb jaane lagte hain
Tabhi kisi ki aawaaz se woh choonk jaate hain
Aree waah yahan toh azab seen chal raha hai
Ladka ladke ko hothoo  ko chumne jaa raha hai
Wahan kuch gunde aa jatte hai jinhone sharab pee rakhi thi
Ayye tujhe jo karna hai kar lekin tere baad humari baari
Tabhi unme se ek ladka bolta hai
Bhai maal bhi acha hai
Woh raunak ko ajeeb nazro se dekhta hai tamas aage aa jata hai
Tamas;-niklo yahan se
Tabhi unme se ek ladka tamas ko dhakka deta hai aur woh gir jata hai
Aur woh raunak ke taraf badhne lagte hai
Tamas uthata hai aur tabhi uska chehra safeed aur ankhhe laal ho jatti hai
Woh sab wahan se darr ke bhaag jaate hai
Raunak :-tamas woh chalege tamas piche dekhta hai toh uska chehra ek dum thik tha
Woh dono ghar jaane ke liye nikalte hain
Tamas raunak se kheta hai ki woh gadhi ke paas chala jaaye woh thodi der me aata hai
Raunak chala jata hai
Tamas unme se ek ladko ko pakad leta hai aur uska wahin bhayanak roop phir samne aa jata hai tamas uss ladke ke sahrir se saara khoon chus leta hai ek he baar me tabhi piche raunak aa jata hai
Tamas chalo ap abhi bhi yahan khade ho...
Tamas ke hothoon pe khoon lgga tha aur uska chehra ek dum safeed tha lekin piche mudte he sab thik tha
Raunak :-chalo aaj vicky ke guru ji ghar aane wale hain mummy ne unse he shadi ki tareek nikalvani hai..
Udhar raunak ke ghar pe Vicky ke guru ji aa gaye the saath pe Vicky ke mummy papa bhi the
Saveta:-namaste guru ji aayie bathiye
Sab baith jaate hain
Saveta guru ji ko raunak ki kundli dikhati hai
Guru ji usse dekh ke thode choonk jaate hain
Ramesh aur saveta saath me Vicky aur uska mummy papa bhi dar jaate hai
Guru ji;-yeh koi aam kundli nahi hai
Saveta :-matlab guru ji
Tabhi wahan par tamas aur raunak aa jaate.hai
Guru ji ko bechaini hone lagti hai woh tamas ko dekhte he darr jatte hai aur bina kuch bole wahan se bhaag jaate hain sab unke iss tarah jaane se ghabra jaate hai lekim Vicky ke mummy jaruri  kaam ka hoga keh kar baat ko taal deti hai
Apne aashram me jaate hai guru ji apni tantra vidhya shuru kar dete Hain aur ek letter likhne lagte hai tabhi ek toofan.unke aashram ke andar aa jata hai tab tak guru ji ne woh letter poora kar liya tha aur apni bhagvat geeta me rakh diya tha.
Tabhi ek toofan aata hai aur guru ji ke sharrr se.sara khoon chus leta hai
Next day
Yeh baat Vicky ke gharwalon.takk jatti hai raunak aur Vicky ke gharwale aashram me pahunch jatte hain
Police bhi wahan pahunch chukki thi woh guru ji ke rishtedaron ke barre me.puch rhe the tabhi vicky ke maa.agge aa kehti hai ki woh unke guru ji the police wale unhe unka sharer dikhate hai unhe pehchana mushkil tha
Sab unhe dekh ke dar jatte hai police unka sara saman Vicky ke gharwalon ko de deti hai kyuki unhe unki maut ki sirf yeh wajah he pta chali thi ki sharer se sara khoon nikal liya gya hai

Vicky aur uske gharwale bhut dukh ki halat me the akhir unse itna purana rishta jo tha unka Vicky ko unke saman me maha bhagvat geeta milti hai woh usse jaake mandir me rakh deta hai
Dinn beetne lagte hai raunak ko ab andhere se dar nahi lagta tha lekin roj raat ko usse ek.khuwaab aata tha jisme tamas uska khoon chus raha hota tha woh din ba din kamzoor ho raha tha
5 dinn baad
Vicky roj ki tarah mahabagvat geeta padh raha tha achanak usse ek khat dikhayi deta hai
Woh usse kholta hai aur choonk jata hai bhaag ke apni maa ke paas jata hai uski mummy bhi choonk jaati hai aur jaldi se raunak ke ghar chale jaate hai
Raunak ke ghar me
Vicky:-aunty aunty raunak kahan ho ap log
Sab bahar aate hai
Raunak:-kya huya
Saveta bhi pareshan ho jatti hai
Gayitri:-saveta ji raunak ki jaan kahtre me hain
Saveta choonk jatti hai
Lekin kiise
Tamas se...
Raunak bhi choonk jata hai
Raunak:-yeh Kya keh rahe ho hosh me bhi ho kya keh rahe ho mujhe tamas se khatra
Tabhi gayitri saveta aur raunak ko woh khatt dikhati hai
Yeh khatt guru ji ne likha tha thik apni maut ki raat
Tabhi woh log khatt padhne lagte hai...
Mere paas ab jayda wakhat nhi hai
Kyu ki woh aata he hoga kisi bhi wakhat
Tamas koi insaan nahi hai woh ek rakhat pichaach hai jo yahan kisi maksad se aaya hai uska maksad hai raunak raunak koi aam insaan nahi hai uski kundli me divye yog hai jiski wajah se woh raunak ko apne saath le jana chahta hai aaj se thik paanch din baad aamavashya ki raat ko woh raunak ke sharer se saara khoon choos lega aur amar ho jayega usse rokne ka sirf ek he tarika hai rudraaksh ki maala usse uske galle me dalte he woh bhasum ho jayega
Saveta aur raunak ghabra jaate hai
Saveta:-aishe kaise ho sakta hai tamas rakhat pichaach kaise
Gayitri:-rakhat pichaach bhut shakti shalli hote hai woh iss duniya me kisi khaas maksad se he aate hai
Saveta:-lekin raunak ke sharer par toh koi Nissan nhi agar usne iske sharer se khoon piya hai toh
Tabhi gayitri jaake ek lep banati hai
Gayitri:-woh aishe nhi dekhte
Gayitri lep leke uski bahoon me lgga deti hai tabhi raunak ke poore haath pe rakhat pichaach ke dantoon ke nishaan nazar aane lagte hain
Woh log darr jaate hai ab sabko yakken ho gya tha raunak ke papa bhi wahan aa gye the unhe bhi sab bta diya gya tha woh log wahan se jaane lagte hai tanh ki kisi safe jagah jaa sakke lekin tabhi tamas wahan aa jata hai sab dar ke piche chale jaate hai lekin ramesh aage aate hai
Ramesh:-beta dekho yeh log kya keh rahe hai ki tum rakhat pichaach ho me janta hoon ki tum bhi humari tarah insaan ho
Usse wakhat tamas apne aasli roop me aake ramesh ko maar deta hai sab dar ke ghar ke mandir me chale jaate hain
Vicky apne papa ko phone karta hai
Achanak.tamas darwaze ko jor se marta hai dar se phone gir jata hai aur unki cheenk.nikal jaati hai unki cheenk sunke Vicky ke papa ghabra jaate hai aur jaldi se.wahan pahunch jaate hai Vicky unhe bahar se he dekh leta hai aur Dar jata hai kahin tamas unhe naa mar de tabhi woh dekhte hai ki vicky ke papa darwaze pe marte huye unhe bahar aane ke liye kehte hai
Lagta hai tamas chala gaya...
Woh log darwaza kholte hai samne vicky ke papa khade the
Gayitri:-ap thik toh hai naa
Haan kyu...
Chaliye yahan se isse pehle woh phir aa jaye
Tabhi Vicky ke papa raunak ka haath pakad lete hai aur sabko.dhakka mar dete hai
Asal me woh tamas tha Vicky ke papa ke.roop me
Aur woh raunak ko leke bahar aa jata hai
Raunak:-kyu kar rahe ho aisha tum toh pyaar krte ho naa mujhse
Tamas:-pyaar haan bhut karta hoon bachpan se haan tumhe jo bachpan se apne aas paas kisi ke hone ka ehsaas hota tha woh me he tha raunak mene 21 saal intezaar kiya hai iss dinn ka ab tumhara khoon peeke me tumhari aatma ko bhi apne saath le jaunga aur amar ho jaunga
 Dusri taraf vicky aur uski mummy aur saveta Raunak ko dhoondh rhy the acanak vicky ka pair kisi se takrata hai woh gir jaata hai samne uske papa usse wahin halat me mile
Bhut mushkil se apni cheekh ko rooka aur raunak ko dhundne lgge unhe woh mil jatte hai
Tamas ne apna kaam shuru kr diya tha uske sharer se khoon peene lgga tha woh dhire dhire behosh hone lgta hai
Vicky aur sab dar jatte hai
saveta :-hume isse rokna hoga
Vicky:- isse sirf ek he cheez rokk skti hai
Woh bhaag ke jaata hai aur rudraksh ki maala leke aata hai aur usse tamas ke galle me daal deta hai uske dalte he tamas jal ke bhasam ho jata hai
Akhir kaar raunak bach jata hai....

The end

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